Each Monday in Term 1 Room 15 write recounts about the weekend. Today we discussed all the things needed to make a recount interesting to read. Five students read their stories to the class and Abby was voted the winner! Here's her great recount:
Mmmm I moaned as I slowly got out of bed. I rubbed my eyes, it was Saturday morning and I seriously didn't want to get out of bed! Later in the day my heart was beating excitedly because I was going to a party at my mums friends new house. At last when I got there I nervously stared up at the house as I walked in. It was as noisy as an elephant having a fit. I walked upstairs and there were loads of people but in the corner of my eye I saw a big table with lots of plates and food so I started eating. Then I saw my brother with chips so I ran to the lounge and watched the boys play a video game while eating chips. Finally I watched a movie.
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